Somewhere Between Here and There

Written
2010

 Somewhere Between Here and There

 

Old Jake over there is

       a perfect product?

One of the instant folks

       made on a Saturday night

       before quitting time.

Truly a Saturday Night Special.

Or perhaps the end product of a million 5

       years of development.

The last link in a development chain.

The long sought perfect prototype.

From here on humans are to be

       the Old Jake model?

Maybe it is time for a recall.

Old Jake has some major faults.

He is still easily convinced

       of evil in others and never in himself.

He is ambivalent as hero

        or coward.

Old Jake has never found

       the balance between

       greed and generosity.

Between love and hate.

Between reason and emotion.

Between strength and weakness.

Between poverty and wealth.

Between friend and foe.

Between appeasement and war.

Between superstition and reality.

Old Jake is conflict-stifled.

He runs around with tea bags

       and shouts obscenities.

If he is the last link

       in the evolutionary chain

       we are doomed.

Surely neither the Saturday Night Special

       nor the Jake Last Link models

       are where we should be going.

Hope and optimism are building blocks

       for a better world.

Rather than empty tries

       to repair and perfect Jake,

       why not wait for further evolution?

 

Doug Minnis

April 18, 2010

 

 

Notes
I read a poem by George Oppen that includes the idea that mankind has a awfully big ego if he believes he is the "last link in the chain" I thought about this and the Creation idea and thought we should keep on trying.