Immortality - free sample

Written
2010

 Immortality, Free Sample

 

It arrived by registered mail

         in a plain brown wrapper.

The enclosed note indicated

        I had been selected

         as one of the chosen few

         to sample immortality

         by taking the attached pill.

If I liked the sample I could

         make immortality permanent.

The idea was so exciting that

          I actually danced around the room

         for the first time in decades. 

But, of course,

          I swallowed the pill.

In the blink of an eye

         I was in a future time unknown.

It was I for sure.

As I checked myself out

         it was clear I was the

         same old man.

         Glasses, dental bridge

         and hearing aids still needed.

I picked up the newspaper

         and the headlines read

         about the same

         as the time I came from.

Murder, war, corruption

         and scandals.

I quickly ended my visit

         to immortality.

I want no part of living forever

         with mankind the same and

         being too old for

         the challenge of changing things.

So if you want to interest

          me in immortality,

         either I am young and vital

         or mankind will have been perfected.

 

January 2, 2010

Doug Minnis        

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Notes
To think I was once not a cynic. My friend George and I have long chats about the nature of humanity. We do sort of end up denying the idea of the perfection of man. We have yet to see any sighs of such progress.Ay least I used a picture of me in the grape arbor. Symbplism of progress?