Daffodil Hill

Written
2007

 Daffodil Hill

 

I knew that it was a bit of Heaven

         when it grabbed my breath

         and tore out tears.

 

Waves of golden yellow,

         of creamy white,

         of orange and red bells in white capes

         blanketed the gentle roll of the hill.

          

Flowers of Spring as far

         as the eye could see.

 

Boxed by paths full

         of noisy flat-landers

         who are struck dumb

         by the flowered counterpane.

 

A walk through the front entrance

         as clean a cut from sound

         as the door of the funeral church.

 

 

So silent an awe

         only the camera clicks

         and the peacock’s call        

         punctuate the afternoon scene.

 

Children run along the path

         as silent as the butterfly's

         gliding flight.

 

Sleepy sheep graze and gaze

         at the pastoral scene

         suited for chapel ceilings.

 

Questions and beauty's praise

         are whispered in the daffodil’s ear.

 

If this is Heaven's quilt,

         are the 450,000 blooms

         the gentle souls

         of children who have run over such a hill?

 

Have they returned to celebrate

         the blue sky and warm sun

         of this once-a-year Spring day?

 

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Notes
An old poem,edited and changed