Canoeing Solitude

Written
2000

 His canoe is launched with the rising sun

      as it first warms the coldest rock

      on the highest peak,

     and then lets warmth trickle

        down the mountainside.

The lake, too frigid to move,

      is a frozen picture.

His canoe glides forward

      with a reverent hiss.

The paddle enters

      and leaves the water

      with a soft splash and drip.

The forward movement

         as quiet as church ushers.  

Behind him the lake works

      to restore order.

Fawns edge the lake.

A single eagle fills the sky.

Fall paints masterpieces on the lake.

He sees her canoe and waves.

She waves back.

She points to the deer.

He signals shared appreciations and

      directs her eyes to the eagle.

They move closer,

      share thoughts and

      move on together.

Two canoes become a raft

      as they see the day mature.

They move to shore to

      watch the day die

      in a camera-ready sunset. 

They share the glories of the day.

Their fire dies

      as they talk.

No need for sleep.

Again the wind has forgotten to blow

     and l

eaves the morning cold on the lake.

Again the sun warms.

Again the fall colors are

      on the canvas.

Again the deer and the eagle

      are in place.

Their canoes head North and South.

Complete solitude again

       as two canoes become

       part of the silent lake.

 

 

 

Notes
I have always enjoyed the canoe on a silent lake. Perhaps there is no moment more quiet. To put a bit of romance in this setting jars up memories of Nelson Eddy and Janet McDonald. I can almost hear them singing.