Dancing Labor

Written
2011

 Old concrete jack hammered

      into small pieces

      voiding my long ago labor.

 

Each slab laid there with great care

      43 years ago

      when I was young.

 

I hauled, spread,      tamped down

      and trowel finished

      to amateur perfection.

 

The only salt finish

      came from my brow

      that hot July day 43 years ago.

 

Now bam-bam the jackhammer sings

      as it chunks my work

      for the waiting wheelbarrow.

 

The dissemblers move with the grace

      of experience and careful scripting

      by a master choreographer.

 

This is their thousandth performance

      since taking the show on the road

      and everyone knows his lines.

     

 

 

 

Forty-three years of service dismissed

      in minutes, laying bare

      long hidden soil.

 

Then as the curtain falls

      a quick change of the stage

      and the actors again enter stage right.

 

Begin the creation dance

      with the music of the mixing truck

      pounding out a rapid rhythm.

 

Muscled masonry mimes

      become dance partners

      with graceful power moves.

 

Their movements match

      the gushing stream

      of grey concrete

 

Dancer’s much practiced silence moves

      respond to the flow of spewing

      concrete in tsunami flood.

 

Awkward piles soon become as pliant

      as the sleeping yellow dog

      on the hearth.

 

Swish, slosh and the concrete

      becomes a patio floor -

      art work of the master labor dancers

Doug Minnis

November 9,2011

     

 

Notes
I marveled at the expertness of the concrete crew who put in my driveway and patio. They did their tasks as if they had done them in tight cordination without an verbal communication. They could work hard for 1/2 an hour without saying aword. They werelike dancing robats. When they faced a new problem they would become human and use the problem solving skills that experts bring to job tasks. I am glad I took so many pictures